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do u mean my sexy Terra or your sexy Terra? LMFAO :p
"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"
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That sprite has a nice style to it but there are some black pixels in the hair that should be gone.
The portrait is pretty messy; it seems to have a lot of pieces borrowed from Smash's.
..I vote for Locke next.
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I just noticed...this has a similar style to chrono trigger mixed with the style of Golden Sun characters...I'm not sure if I got the first game right but it definitely feels very Golden Sun-ish to me. ^-^
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Believe me when I say this; shading is indeed your friend,so take advantage of him.
The back of his jacket needs much more shading it looks a bit odd at points, also don't forget that Locke's jacket has a small hood on the back of it (that he never uses), also his boots need some serious shading, the front views are all fine but the back and side views (which are more frequent) look really bad in comparison. Other than what I mentioned I do not find anything particularly wrong with this sprite.
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The only thing I have a real issue with from this style is that the characters' heads all blur into their necks. Terra looks like her head bubbled up from her chest like a tumor...
The actual outlineless watercolor style is fine overall, but please remember that sprites don't have proper necks, so you have to shade heavily there to give the illusion that they do.
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@lijj: idk if djinn is busy or not. :/