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Final Fantasy VI: Revised Old Style Edition

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(06-22-2020, 09:32 AM)SilentEnigma Wrote:
(06-19-2020, 09:03 PM)Matt Wrote: Looking for any text bugs/missed grammar that need some fixing. I'll update this post as I go.

Thank you, Matt. This is very helpful.

I was going to do a snap update because of the two menu text issues, but then I saw your post growing...

I'm decently concerned about the rate of errors you are catching, so I will probably take a little more time and go over things some more as well.


Quote:Cyan
"Rrraagh!
 Which of you spilt the poison!?"
[from DarkMage's FF6 Improvement project, "Who" -> "Which of you"]

Are you referring to the use of "you" instead of "ye"? Believe it or not, I actually went back and forth on this. Not sure why I landed on "you", but I would agree it's the wrong call.

Actually, I meant to point out that it should probably be "spilt the poison" and not "split the poison". Scorcher's suggestion would also work nicely.

Also, found some more
*At the banquet after you ask the first question, when Gestahl asks if you have another question to ask, the second option is just an empty space with a period.
*Strago when the Floating Continent appears: "If the three were ever moved out of6+ their perfect alignment, the resulting imbalance would..."
*As Celes prepares to jump off the cliff at the start of the WOR, there's a weird paragraph spacing in the textbox.
*"Gerad" before fighting the tentacles: "What are standing around for, Celes!? Give me a hand!"
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RE: Final Fantasy VI: Revised Old Style Edition - by Matt - 06-23-2020, 05:59 PM
RE: Final Fantasy VI: Revised Old Style Edition - by REDTITAN - 10-12-2021, 02:26 PM

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