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Edge
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Really great work overall. However, his walking backwards sprites have some awkwardness around the shoulders. He doesn't appear to have his shoulder pads for one. Also, while I think I like how you connected his head to his neck, it's a little ambiguous due to how the cape just starts without any division.

More on the cape - the shading lines look tacked-on, you may want to connect them all the way to the bottom edge of the cape (look at things like Edgar or Celes's capes for reference).

Really good overall, and these are actually just minor criticisms


Messages In This Thread
Edge - by Zeemis - 06-06-2009, 10:40 PM
RE: Edge - by Fantasy87 - 09-22-2010, 07:56 AM
RE: Edge - by Akai - 09-22-2010, 11:37 AM
RE: Edge - by Yuke311 - 09-24-2010, 03:00 PM
RE: Edge - by SSJ Rick - 09-24-2010, 05:34 PM
RE: Edge - by Yuke311 - 09-29-2010, 10:45 AM
RE: Edge - by DjinnAndTonic - 09-29-2010, 11:22 AM
RE: Edge - by Yuke311 - 09-29-2010, 11:28 AM

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