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06-18-2016, 12:46 AM
(06-17-2016, 11:13 PM)Lockirby2 Wrote: Looking cool! I like the dialogue and the music. I feel as though you could improve this by having the characters move around a bit more during the conversation rather than having so many dialogue boxes in a row.
Thanks, I was thinking about that. I'll try to coordinate the dialogue with some movement. I was so focused on getting the words right, I forgot about the characters...
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