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First and foremost, great job learning this stuff! Always nice to see another MML/song hack maker spring up. Smile These are all worthy enough for submission, but I do have just a few notes for feedbacks sake, if you don't mind, while listening to them:

1) BoF Cave Theme - The low part/bass strings are rather soft, could be louder... or maybe even swap that out for the actual bass instrument instead, would make the low part sound more foreboding. I just think the low part should stand out more. Also the flute section might benefit from some vibrato.

2) Wicked Child - Wondering where the kick and snare part went, is this the NES version? The Tom sounds cool though, a bit repetive at times but an interesting substitution for kick and snare I suppose. Gives it some 'umph'.

3) Praying Hands - Is that a piano used for the low bassy part at the start? It could be louder that low part is not really coming in as loud as I think it is meant to stand out. FF6 Piano sucks at lower octaves. Other than that the rest sounds pretty awesome!

4) DQ2 Overworld - No complaints on this one, except I think the flute section might benefit from some vibrato, for those longer notes, and a bit of a fast volume fade at the end of them - little details go a long way. Wink

5) Lavender Town - Could benefit a lot from a higher reverb value, to make it echo like the original. Also kinda missing that simple percussion snare drum used in the original to keep the rythem of the song going better. Honestly this is a drastically watered down version compared to the original song, which isn't good considering the original had less tracks to utilize.

6) Kalos Plant - Despite it again being a much watered down version from the original, I like it. The Tom works in place of that sick-ass beat from the original enough to still make the song work as a sort of alternate version, and the melody is there nicely.

I suppose I'll wait for your response before uploading them to the database, in case you'd like to touch any up, but if not I understand and these do meet the requirements in terms of quality, looping correctly and what-not.


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Submission - by madsiur - 04-13-2014, 07:26 PM
RE: Submission - by Royaken - 04-13-2014, 07:50 PM
RE: Submission - by madsiur - 04-13-2014, 07:52 PM
RE: Submission - by Royaken - 04-13-2014, 08:14 PM
RE: Submission - by madsiur - 04-13-2014, 08:37 PM
RE: Submission - by Royaken - 04-13-2014, 11:59 PM
RE: Submission - by madsiur - 04-14-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: Submission - by Royaken - 04-14-2014, 12:42 AM
RE: Submission - by madsiur - 04-14-2014, 12:44 AM
RE: Submission - by Royaken - 04-14-2014, 12:48 AM
RE: Submission - by Tsushiy - 04-25-2014, 10:34 AM
RE: Submission - by madsiur - 04-25-2014, 11:21 AM
RE: Submission - by Tsushiy - 04-25-2014, 11:37 AM
RE: Submission - by madsiur - 04-25-2014, 12:00 PM
RE: Submission - by Royaken - 05-16-2014, 04:44 AM
RE: Submission - by LoneRedMage - 02-25-2017, 07:47 AM
RE: Submission - by Gi Nattak - 02-25-2017, 01:17 PM
RE: Submission - by LoneRedMage - 02-25-2017, 03:09 PM
RE: Submission - by Gi Nattak - 02-25-2017, 05:05 PM
RE: Submission - by LoneRedMage - 11-11-2017, 02:57 PM
RE: Submission - by Gi Nattak - 11-11-2017, 04:26 PM
RE: Submission - by madsiur - 11-11-2017, 05:09 PM
RE: Submission - by LoneRedMage - 11-11-2017, 06:04 PM
RE: Submission - by Gi Nattak - 11-11-2017, 06:32 PM

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