REQUEST: Namingway

I am a dirty, dirty triple-poster... but what's your professional opinion on this? I made a few slight alterations to make it look more like the image in the OP. I am great at nitpicking details, but really bad at making things that are actually new. I couldn't have made the first sprite to save my life, let alone any sprite that comes from any other angle.

Is this something you think you could work with? Please feel free to tweak it as you see necessary.



Grrrr... it looks like its blurring the colors when i stretch it on the forum. If you download the image you should be able to see pixel by pixel.