03-07-2018, 09:19 PM
another thing I'm noticing is a lack of consistency, look at the gloves for example, in some places it's brown and in others its blue, also look at his collar and shoulder pads, he has a brown collar sideways but backside he has a white collar, and his shoulder pads are gone, another tip, try to avoid using a heavy amount of the skin tones on the clothing especially when you have the alternative color that should be used (in this case brown, there is no brown in his upper body, but there should be keep at it
"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"
-HNIC
-HNIC