09-02-2014, 05:34 PM
for the cloud, as far as I can see you tweaked the hair around a bit and did a little here and there to some parts of his body, but honestly I'd like to see how it looks in game
as for your Sora, its an alright attempt but his poses are far too much like Gau's to even really notice a substantial difference he looks just like Gau with a different hair style and outfit, which I'll say the hair isn't too bad, hair can be one of the trickiest things to do and for a beginner you nailed that much, I mean it isn't perfect, touch it up a tad bit detail-wise and make it a darker brown
also I would like to see some in game screen shots
remember they can look nice as an image, but if they don't work in game they're useless (I'm not trying to bring you down or discourage you I'm just being honest)
as for your Sora, its an alright attempt but his poses are far too much like Gau's to even really notice a substantial difference he looks just like Gau with a different hair style and outfit, which I'll say the hair isn't too bad, hair can be one of the trickiest things to do and for a beginner you nailed that much, I mean it isn't perfect, touch it up a tad bit detail-wise and make it a darker brown
also I would like to see some in game screen shots
remember they can look nice as an image, but if they don't work in game they're useless (I'm not trying to bring you down or discourage you I'm just being honest)
"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"
-HNIC
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