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This one is for capt.catchphrase, he is a little bit too big loll Give me some feedbacks

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(05-07-2013, 10:51 PM)Astaroth_ Wrote: This one is for capt.catchphrase, he is a little bit too big loll Give me some feedbacks

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Lol, he does kinda look like Schwarzenegger. But honestly, that's how I pictured him in my head.

The only criticism I would give is in order to make him more like his PC sprite, the shoulder pads would have to be a lighter shade of blue, like what you see on Edgar here, since they share the same palette. Smile

Not a big fan of the hand gesture, but I see that you got it from the concept art, so that's not a big deal. At least you didn't make his lips ungodly huge too. XD
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I would put more detail into his jacket if I were you


"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"

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@capt.catchphrase I tried to make his shoulder blue but it dont fit. I dont have enough colors and it look weird !

@poco I updated my post and added more shading to his jacket
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I see it

work on the sleeves more


"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"

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Done! :-)
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thats better


"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"

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thanks poco ;-)
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np man

I would try a darker green to see how it looks, like maybe a hunter green or even forest green would work


"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"

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yes poco , I like him more with a darker color, I also changed is pose,

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