Kirito (Sword Art Online)

it isn't a bad start, personally I would heavily work on his backside, its way too similar to Setzer, although an ideal base, try working around it somewhat, tweak the shoulders a bit and work on the front a little here and there, also try to make it so that his head facing sideways is a bit more proportioned because it is slightly off (try looking at other sprites and look for the consistency with where their eyes, shape of their heads, and hair, you'd notice in most cases they all align somewhat in the same way), you got some potential, keep it up man, you can make this sprite awesome