Snow ( not finished!)

It's good (for a beginer [no offence ^.^;;]) but it does need a lot of improvements. You need to take away the Setzer feel :/
Here's some tips --

○ Trim the hair

○ Make his coat a light-tan color

○ Make the top of his coat cover the lower part of his hair and a tab bit of his chin from the side view if possible.

○ Give him Dark Grey gloves

○ give him a blue scarf around his hips (the end of the scarf hangs down)

○ make the back of his boots a light blue-ish shade

○ it's hard to see, but his hair is a very light blonde

If you need any more tips, refurance back to this pic -- http://finalfantasy.wikia.com/wiki/File:Snow.png