Talon Teaser
Hey guys, unfortunately I'm kind of at a standstill with Brydon seeing as how I'm not sure how to go about his hair style
in the meantime I have decided to work on a completely custom char
I threw the name Talon for now (I'll change it most likely)
at the moment I'm not sure if he'll have a place in any of my projects but there is a good chance I'll throw him in the mix
he is intended to be a mercenary
this is the update:
give me some feedback guys I wanna know what u all think
in the meantime I have decided to work on a completely custom char
I threw the name Talon for now (I'll change it most likely)
at the moment I'm not sure if he'll have a place in any of my projects but there is a good chance I'll throw him in the mix
he is intended to be a mercenary
this is the update:
give me some feedback guys I wanna know what u all think
"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"
-HNIC
12-09-2012, 05:39 PM
As I said on Skype, I really love this sprite! I do think the hair could kinda could use a little more detail, or maybe something different like a militant buzz-cut as I suggested. I really like the name 'Talon' a lot also, it seems to work very nicely imo. I'd still think about naming him 'Meril' though, like the dude from The Walking Dead XD Totally an older aged soldier/mercenary badass that I could really see using Guns and Knifes. =)
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12-09-2012, 05:40 PM
haha thanks for the feedback Mike
"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"
-HNIC
12-09-2012, 06:30 PM
Lookin pretty nice! The only thing that catch my eye, is the way his coat close on his belt buckle. It feel a little bit weird that its so opened on his chest and closed on his hips.
12-09-2012, 06:54 PM
yeah I already tweaked it a bit since I uploaded this :p
"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"
-HNIC
12-09-2012, 07:44 PM
Looking really good man, Love that eye patch!
Can't really see anything wrong with him other than what's already mentioned haha, looking forward to see what you do with him. I'm hoping to see some custom poses.
Can't really see anything wrong with him other than what's already mentioned haha, looking forward to see what you do with him. I'm hoping to see some custom poses.
12-09-2012, 08:31 PM
I already tweaked it lolz
I'll put up the update now :p
I'll put up the update now :p
"Sometimes ninjas do wrong to each other, and in dat way the force of tha earf' comes around da moon - and at that presence, da dirt, it overshadows the grass, so you're like, I can't cut dis grass, there's no sun comin' through. So in order to enable each other the two fruits have to look each other in da eye and understand we can only be right, as da ripe is wrong, you know what I mean?"
-HNIC
12-10-2012, 12:07 AM
Very nice Poco ;-)
12-10-2012, 01:29 AM
The left version looks a lot better bro.
12-10-2012, 04:14 AM
I like this character, looks really good. i wouldn't mind using him as a Setser replacement. I like the hair TBH Paco, only Cyan has that slick hair kinda look. I think a simple hair style allows the eye patch to stand out and it draws the eye to it, pardon the pun. I'm curious how your going to pull off the winking pose, you might have to swap the eye patch to the other side.
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