FFVI: Divergent Paths

I'm getting ready to share an addendum script of Divergent Paths with all you guys here at FF6H.  It'll be the first draft, so I'm looking for feedback and further editing.  I'm still not good at expanding roms myself and have been using Rodimus Primal's Ted Woolsey patch as a "starter script".  That way, I can playtest my changes without too much fuss.  If anyone's down to help teach a newb how to expand roms so the changes in the script will show for everyone interested, I'd be grateful.  I'll need to know that sort of thing when I'm ready to patch, since "DP Final-cut" isn't expanded.

Also, is it possible to attach (or otherwise publically upload) the .txt file to this site?  I'd like to give those interested a crack at playtesting the script changes...

 Here's an excerpt. Buckle -up for the "feels trip": 

[caption #1000]
Rachael: What sort of treasure are we off to find today, <Locke>?

[caption #1001]
<Locke>: You're not going to believe what I've discovered up here!

[caption #1002]
<Locke>: Come on, it's worth a fortune!

[caption #1003]
Rachael: <Locke>!
The bridge!

[caption #1004]
<Locke>: RACHAEL!

[caption #1005]
<Locke>: Rachael!
You're okay?!

[caption #1006]
Rachael: Who ARE you?!

[caption #1007]
Rachael's Father: They'd just accepted her enrollment at
The Imperial Academy!<EOP>
Rachael's Father: It's YOUR fault she's lost her memory!
<Locke>: Wait a minute!
Just let me talk with her_

[caption #1008]
Rachael: Leave us alone! I don't know who you are, but your presence isn't welcome here anymore!

[caption #1009]
It may be best to leave Rachel
alone for a while. She'll need to
start a new life soon_
<EOP>
<Locke>, I'm so sorry.

[caption #1010]
<Locke>: When I returned home,
I discovered that Rachel had perished in an Imperial attack
against the town. <EOP>
<Locke>: I never should
have left her side_

[caption #1017]
Oh! Is that you, <Locke>?
It's been a while!
<EOP>
Not to worry, your love is quite safe down here!

[caption #1018]
Are we satisfied? Medicine
won't make itself, you know?

[caption #1019]  (out of sequence caption - referancing caption #1021)
<Locke>:
_ _ _

[caption #1020]
I used some of my BEST
herbs to preserve her body.
She won't age a day!

[caption #1021]
<Locke>: You're SURE those herbs
will work?

[caption #1022]
Of course! The love of your life
will sleep here, like this, forever.

[caption #1023]
<Locke>: What if there were
some way to bring her back?

[caption #1024]
You mean the legendary Phoenix_?
With a [treasure] like that you could bring ANYONE back. All your grief would come to an end.
And, maybe her's would too_

[caption #1025]
<Locke>: I miss her_

[caption #1026]
<Celes>:
_it's uncanny_

[caption #1027]
Someone desperate enough to preserve her life asked me to keep her down here - locked in a state of eternal rest - until they return.

[caption #2591]
[<Locke>!]

[caption #2592]
<Locke>: You're all safe?! Thank the gods! <D>
Behold! Pheonix, the legendary treasure that will end all grief, itself!

[caption #2593]
[That looks like Magicite!] <EOP>
<Locke>: It is! Legend says that ages ago the Phoenix turned itself into stone to redeem the life of another. And, it appears that the legend is true. <EOP>
<Locke>: She's got some major cracks in her, though_
I'm afraid she may have lost her power.

[caption #2594]
<Celes>: <Locke>! You've been searching for SO long_

[caption #2595]
<Locke>: When Rachael passed, nothing made sense anymore. Somehow I lost the truth_ <EOP>
<Locke>: Nothing this world has to offer will ever be real to me without that_ <EOP>
I must find a way to reclaim the truth!

[caption #2596]
[So, you're headed to Kohlingen_?]

[caption #2597]

  Sometime later, in the village of Kohlingen_ <E$FF><OP$12>

[caption #2598]
If only the Magicite didn't bear those deep cracks_
I guess it won't work after all. <Locke>, I'm sorry_

[caption #2599]
<Locke>:
_why_

[caption #2600]
The Magicite_!
It completely shattered!

[caption #2601]
Rachel: <Locke>_

[caption #2603]
<Locke>: Rachael! <EOP>
Rachael: The Phoenix has used the last of its power to give me a few moments. I'll have to leave again soon. <EOP>
Rachael: But, there's something I MUST tell you, something I never had the chance to say in life_

[caption #2604]
Rachael: In my dying moments, my memory returned, and I thought only of the joy you brought me. <EOP>
Rachael: I want you to remember how happy you made me, darling! Because it's true!

[caption #2605]
<Locke>: *sob-sob* <EOP>
Rachael: You MUST cast off the anguish you've been harboring against those who've harmed you! Those chains have bound your heart for too long! <EOP>
Rachael: You MUST fully love again_whomever your heart desires! Someone needs you more than they can say. Please, love her as much as you did me_<EOP>
Rachael: Phoenix! Be reborn! And, mend my love's broken-heart!

[caption #2606]
<A1>: Rachael...<D>thank you.

[caption #2607]
<Celes>: No, <Locke>...<D>thank you.

[caption #2608]
<Locke>: Thanks, I'm okay_ <D>
Healing Rachael put my heart at ease. From here on out, I'll be all right. Let's go! We've got work to do!