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Something I might work on - LordSutebenu - 09-27-2012 Quote:Beat after beat, step after step, jump after jump and still the drum within him resounded deeper and deeper; the pain was building, his lungs began to refuse the air he breathed. His legs and arms were far beyond the point of simple burn and his vision was dull and blurred. Yet still he went onwards through the sharp thin branches stinging his naked skin, the thorns ripping through cloth and flesh with every move but he refused to stop running. He could hear his heart pounding in his ears, tha-thump tha-thump tha-thump. His body yearned to collapse, to fall, to release into the inviting gravity but he simply couldn't give into that fatal temptation. So, do you think this is worth continuing? RE: Something I might work on - Astaroth_ - 09-28-2012 Yes it really worth continuing! Great intensity. So please, I want more, and I want to know if he'll survive or not and what is chasing him? RE: Something I might work on - OmegaWeaponV5 - 09-28-2012 Keep continuing, it's very dark and edgy like, and its very interesting. |