(01-22-2013, 04:52 PM)Zeemis Wrote:

(01-22-2013, 03:16 PM)CrumpledMedal Wrote: I like it, its nice. I always think Tools would have been a nice Command for him in FFIV, if there had been that stuff then. I mean being rich, he'd have access to all kinds of stuff.(the hovercraft) But he's still be able to do bard singing as well. I just wish that sing worked better in that game and Edward was not a wuss and plot device. But Hide was a funny ability because nobody could hit you, but Edward could not Attack while hiding...

I know it's based on your opinion, but I feel that Cid would have been a better choice for a Tools menu. Tools has always been more of a technology kind of thing, and that fits right in with Cid from FFIV.

Sutebenu, that edit looks a lot better.

(01-24-2013, 01:24 PM)Dr.Blank Wrote: It's probably a bit too late to give my input, but oh well weeeee!
Now mind that my edit is a bit sloppy in places and certainly a different style than you were going for but nonetheless a few problems persist throughout your edits.

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1.The hard dark outline makes Edward look lumpy and quite unhappy.

2.His neck looks odd, like he's jutting his head forward in a awkward fashion.

3.The hair is noisy due to the two lightest colors being too similar.

4.There doesn't seem to be any set light source.

These are all simple problems to fix, though they would require a bit of reworking to get them looking pristine. Either way, can't wait to see what you make next! [/spoiler]